In my
opinion in this catastrophe can see the reaction and power of citizen front this.
The reaction of the people of the north, it was organize for lifting of the
cities because the government’s reaction it was very slow, whit the help, say
the affected residents , even denying assistance from other
countries how Bolivia sending water and others inputs . The People are not
prepared to fight these disaster situations , the State should invest in policy
for the people who know how to react faced with these situations and can
prevent in the future becuase in the
north are not prepared for rain as it does not rain much in the year .
Some cities are blasted , covered by mud and water and
generating many victims, it says about
90 percent of devastating in Copiapo, is reported a lot victims there are 23
dead persons and 57 missing persons, this number are expected to increase in
the courses of the day. Is needed urgent and quick help to start again cleaning
and rebuilding the cities is needed, remove sludge and debris to end the health emergency to prevent the
spread of diseases it would be very risky.
The authorities need to act quickly to keep searching for victims and deliver help quickly to people so that by little start back to normality in the affected cities in the north. This reconstruction of the north take long for this is essential for our help. The best solution is to help the North now.
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ResponderBorrarI support your criticism to the government action, but it's like obvious that there's nothing more to do, you just can try to prevent those events, because the mistake was made by the architects and engineers who build housing in territory that's not apt.
ResponderBorraralso i wanted to add some corrections to your grammar, in the first paragraph i think you should had said "The last week there was an unusual rain", and when you say "how Atacama" or "how Bolivia" you're using "how" as a comparison and you should use the word "like" in those cases.
Well i hope you're ok! i'll keep reading your blog haha, bye!
your information is very interesting, i think that the chilean government should take more protagonism in the situation of our country, and should exist more comunication between nationals organizations, like ONEMI.
ResponderBorrarsee you soon.
Ignacio,
ResponderBorrarWC: 303. Very good. Thanks for your contribution, you should invest more time in the edition of your text, you have many grammar and spelling mistakes that should be checked before uploading your writing. Please, consider the following obs.:
(NO “The”) (l) Last week (an: SINGULAR) unusual (rains:PLURAL) FELL? in the north and center of Chile, nobody expected these unusual rains (were) WOULD BE so devastating in the north, causing so MUCH destruction in (NO “the”) cities (how) AS Atacama (IS ATACAMA A CITY?)…
In my opinion in this catastrophe YOU can see the reaction and power of citizenS (front this)
… it was organized ( for lifting of) TO HELP? the cities because the government’s reaction (NO it) was very slow(NO “,”) ( whit) WITH the help, (say) SAID the affected residents , even denying assistance from other countries (how) LIKE Bolivia sending water and other(s) (inputs) THINGS
… and can prevent THEM in the future (because) BECAUSE in the north THEY are not prepared for rain …
…it says (WHO?)about 90 percent of (devastating) DEVASTATION in Copiapo, (is reported a lot victims) A LOT OF VICTIMS HAVE BEEN REPORTED; there are 23 dead persons and 57 missing persons, (this number: SINGULAR) ( are expected: PLURAL) to increase in the course(s )of the day. (Is needed urgent and quick help) URGENT QUICK HELP IS NEEDED to start
…, remov(e)ING sludge and .…
Cheers,
JC